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Thursday, November 18, 2010

This is star wars?

That is the question you will be asking your self after you finnish my book i am wrighting. it is a thing on star wars were the C.I.S. ownes the republic and becomes the empire. here is my first chapter.
the confederate uprizing

Chapter 1
The Invasion on Mygeeto:
The city of Crossta was covered in fog, ash and smoke. The clone troopers of the 501st have been fighting long and hard. The front lines of both teams have not moved for weeks. Now the republic spies are breaking through the C.I.S. front lines.
“Jake shut up before you give away our position,” barked Commander Steven.
“sorry commander” apologized a little to loud.
“did you say something” said a droid of the C.I.S.
“no” said another droid
“Jake, you better hope those aren't supers” whispered the angry commander as he looked for a thermal detonator. He found one and hit the button. The ball glowed red and the commander thew it over thee wall. They heard an explosion and the wall that hid them crumbled. Laser blasts flew every were. Jake and the other sabators managed to escape the mini battle.
“We have got to get to the cannons” said Jake
“ ' I agree' ” said a voice on the com. “ ' get there and destroy the cannons' ”
“yes sir” said Jake. The squad zigzagged through the smoked, shuffled through ankle deep ash till they were right next to the cannons. They sneaked behind the cannons and placed time bombs on the venerable areas. They ran. But the only one who was not fast enough was Jake.

When the rest of the 501st saw and heard the blast they rejoiced. But the battle raged on. The ceasing of cannon fire helped get some men on the battle field. Jedi master Kai-Audi-Mundi was a big help to every one. Though, his skill with the force and with a saber were strong, he could not stop an entire army. Some how the C.I.S. Sneaked a squad of bombers into the air. The confederate rained down on the republic.
“The battle may have been lost but not the war” said Kai-Audi-Mundi just before he died from blood loss.
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